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Wednesday, January 24, 2007

Pidgin Poetry

This piece was written while Ra was working as an Assistant Manager at a tea-estate at Idukki, Permid, Kerala (not necessarily in that order!).

Actually, I wrote this late one night when high fever would not let me sleep.

I happened to lay my hands on a printout of a mail from Rahul that mentioned his experiences with snakes and leeches at the estate and I guess it kinda' went to my head, cranked it up and this is what came out!

Here goes:

Snakes n' leeches though not on verdant beaches;
n' when they snipe at him, 'Rahul_does' screeches!
Try as he might
to tell us it's delight
I'm sure it's fright...
that beats out the daylight
outta' our chappie so bright
(An' u always thought he was a tubelight... !!!!)
Well siree! he may resemble a squid
but our man's still the 'Braveheart of Permid'
With umbrella as lance
when he breaks into war-dance
Among all Idukki folk spreads the buzz
"Hail Rahul_does!!!!"

2 comments:

Sidhusaaheb said...

Good One, lol
Cyberkitty | Homepage | 01.24.07 – 1:02 pm | #

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Gee…thanks!!
Sidhusaaheb | Homepage | 01.24.07 – 2:33 pm | #

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1. The order is Good enough. Peermade, Idukki, Kerala!

2. I will try to find the original mail that I sent to you all guys.. The one about the Snakes and Leeches.

3. Still makes me laugh, 4 years now, but still! Goes to show how good it is!!!

Await the inspiring/inspirational mail…

Ra.
Ra | Homepage | 01.24.07 – 3:47 pm | #

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Thank you, Your Excellency!

Unfortunately, I could not locate the email in my inbox. It seems like I deleted it, without realising how much I would miss it later on. It would be good if you can manage to find it.
Sidhusaaheb | Homepage | 01.24.07 – 4:05 pm | #

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Here it is!

http://rahuldoes.wordpress.com/2…es-and-leeches/
Ra | Homepage | 01.24.07 – 4:21 pm | #

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So you write poetry too! Enjoyed the humor.
Mridula | Homepage | 01.24.07 – 4:45 pm | #

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So you write poerty too? Good humor I must say.
Mridula | Homepage | 01.24.07 – 4:46 pm | #

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@Ra: Goodie Goodie!

@Mridula: This was the first time I tried my hand at poetry and one of the only two times ever. Glad you liked it!
Sidhusaaheb | Homepage | 01.24.07 – 5:15 pm | #

Sidhusaaheb said...

Thats fabulous …

Specially this part …

“”"to tell us it’s delight
I’m sure it’s fright…
that beats out the daylight
outta’ our chappie so bright
(An’ u always thought he was a tubelight… !!!!)”"”

I’m sure he must be really really delighted to have it for himself :>
Asma | Homepage | 01.24.07 – 8:17 pm | #

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And I’d wait for second one Tooo
Asma | Homepage | 01.24.07 – 8:20 pm | #

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Hehe…Check out his comments above and also his blog post, the link to which he has provided in his second comment.

I don’t know when, or if at all, I’ll ever post the other one.
Sidhusaaheb | Homepage | 01.24.07 – 8:36 pm | #

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Thanks Asma… Thanks Guri. And I Thank *The Academy* and my friends for all that you all have done. I love you all! These are my tears of joy…

(Starts Crying, wiping tears with a pink hanky and meanwhile blows air-kisses towards the Live Audience and the 12,794 Cameras…)
Ra | Homepage | 01.24.07 – 10:49 pm | #

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Liked this. Why havent you been writing poetry earlier here?
shirazi | Homepage | 01.25.07 – 12:01 pm | #

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Thanks Shirazi Sa’ab!

Well, I haven’t really tried writing poetry since I wrote this (if this may be considered as poetry!). I was reminded of this by some of Asma’s own poetry that she posted on her blog.
Sidhusaaheb | Homepage | 01.25.07 – 2:11 pm | #

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I suggest you try your hand on this.
shirazi | Homepage | 01.26.07 – 6:44 am | #

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I’ll remember to post anything similar that I happen to write in the future.
Sidhusaaheb | Homepage | 01.26.07 – 8:19 pm | #

 
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